Short Story

For writing we had 15mins to write anything, but the story had to start with. "I couldn't believe it when..." This is what I can up with.

I couldn’t believe it when… the creature waddled over to puddle and began digging through the mud. I just stood there behind the tree staring at it. What was it? Where did it come from? What was it doing? The rain dripped off the bottom of my huge raincoat. It was like I was paralyzed. I couldn’t decide wether I wanted to run away or go up to it. I mean it didn’t look dangerous apart from those 10cm claws it was using to slash at the gluggy mud, It wasn’t getting any deeper, but the creature seemed determined.  There was a loud Shout from across the park, I turned to see who. I couldn’t quite see who because the lady was wearing a beanie and huge sunglass… Wait those glasses, I knew exactly who it was. My Aunty ran closer and closer. She obviously hadn’t seen the creature yet. For some reason I didn’t want her to like I wanted to keep it for myself. I have no idea why for that split second I felt as if I couldn’t trust her.