This Is my writing on my most embarrassing moment, I am not quite done yet, but here is the first three scenes.
Embarrassing Moment
Going over the bridge I heard the sound of beeping cars surrounding ours and the cranes working hard, heaving the logs high up in the air. I wound down the window to get some fresh air, but all I got was big whiff of gas fumes from the thousands of cars crossing the bridge. I saw the boat sitting there at the docks waiting for us to aboard. I wiped my hand across the window to see more of the boat, my hand almost froze it was like ice.
As I grabbed my bag I looked up at the gigantic boat, I felt tiny. The gas fumes got stronger every step I took towards the boat. The sound of little kids crying, people murmuring and others saying farewells. As I took my first step on the boat I noticed the yellow and black stripes with the warning sign, I had never liked boats or planes and those signs just didn't help.
When we found our way to the bar area, I got a rush of warm air, I plopped my jacket and my bag onto the couch and flopped right on top. I saw a glass bar and some little Tv’s the size of a computer screen. The fumes were gone I could finally breath again and now all I could smell was beer and wine. I heard people yelling at the poor bar men, I felt sorry for them there was only two of them and about fifty people wanting drinks.
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