We are focusing on descriptive writing.
This is my description of Mr Glob.
Mr and Mrs Glob. There is only one way to describe Mr Glob. He has a sharp pointy nose it is almost as sharp as a newly bought pencil. Yes. It is that pointy. I am not exaggerating at all, He has a beard that it kind of looks like he doesn't know at all how to shave a beard. Parts of it are long almost as long as his arm hair. Some parts looks as if there has been no beard at all. He also has a bob hair cut, he says it makes him look and feel younger. I think it makes him look well UGLY, it looks like he has a bowl on his head how is that meant to make you look young? He has old grey cracked lips like a cat had come along and decided to slice them up. His eyes are small and squinty. His head is almost a rounded square. Here is the strangest thing about him and you can imagine how weird this must because of all the other strange things I have told you. One of his eyes are gold and the other dark green. Scary right.
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